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Chronzon

The mighty Daedelus
was ready to leave its system
All that hydrogen burning
Billions of tons of thrust that
were meant to create velocity.
The stars that feed Choronzon,have learned stillness.
The inhabitants of daedelus did not have stillness.

They didn't know that they should be made of momentum,or dimensionality.
It was not only impolite but foolish.
So they tried to force their way across the abyss between stars.
But...
choronzon is the ultimate heat and energy vacuum.
He saw the ignorance,the vanity,and laughed.
A few million miles outside the system,the mighty daedelus has stopped,she doesn't know.
So she wastes all her fuel and falls back into the strange attractor of her own system.And crashes or rather falls into the arms of a rock that tries to catch her.
Daedelus does not know what happened.
Few ever do.
If you would cross the abyss of Choronzon
it is best to do it on his terms.
Otherwise you get no-where.
Its very cold out there,its best that way.

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