Coldest, purest daggers
Throw light to splinters
Slice the dawn's warmth
From the very sky
Fill my chest with ice
Stab my heart with frozen knives
Burn me with the cold
Let me feel the chill
Lungs fill with holes
Freeze in between my gasps
Deprive me of the air
Suffocate me with ice
Know the utter alone
Allow the ice to grow
Never thaw out my heart
The dead, unwanted thing
Ice is my only companion
The only thing close to my soul
Stabbing cold is fair trade
For knowing I'm not alone
A contest entry
- ♥ ..The Only Way I'll Smile is if you Cut me Ear to Ear.. ♥ by BrokenHeartsInVain.
434 points, ended July 14, 25 entries
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Comments
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It's not as discriptive as I was hoping it would be, but it does somewhat explain emotions of depression. I'd like to see you add to it, but, it's your work, so I have no right to tell you what to do with it.
Thank you for entering, and good luck. ♥
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