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You're The Darkest Part Of Me

You're the cord wrapped around my neck. The name I can never forget.
You're the desire that burns within me and the tears that always come afterwards.
You're the constant reminder that the person I used to be is gone.
You're the horrific daydreams and the ghosts that haunt me.
You're the blood that drips from my broken heart and the tears that endlessly fall.
You're the darkest part of me. The part I want to drown out but can't.

Author notes

It came to me last night while I was trying to sleep. For all those who may be worried I didn't have a cord wrapped around my neck but I did used to strangle myself when I was little.

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  • ibelieveingod31638
    August 10
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    This is really dark but really good, the way you talk makes me want to crie nice emotion


  • ckwriter69
    June 27

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    Very well done, dark, but full of inner meanings that you have had in your life. Keep writing sweet heart!!


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    June 26
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    Hi Beautiful,
    Wow... this write is deep and so full of emotion.
    ActuallyI can relate to your penned words, it's like you have taken a page out of my life and wrote about it.
    It is wonderful to see you posting, I have missed reading you.
    I wish you well with much love and happiness.
    Take care sweet heart.


    • Scandalous Beauty
      June 26
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      Thank you darlin'. I am glad that you liked it. I hope you are doing great.

      Luv and hugs,

      Guin