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Candle

To be lit and meld as if we are one
only of loss to light glue solo tonight
meld this candle mesh undone.

May serve a study only Karl Marx

could  trancend nature vs nurture.

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Prompt: Karl Marx

21 wds.

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  • sOuL
    August 20

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    A great poem with everything done with perfection about the poem
    i love it..specially when its about Karl Marx

    • saddie23
      August 20
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Saddie23

  • Bob Fox
    July 12

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    Marx?

    well I think I know him. lol Interesting write though & he was a sad man. Probably sadder even now.

    • saddie23
      July 12
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given. Saddie23


  • Antipodi
    June 26
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    wow poet you have lit a match and this one burns brightly a true literary flame

    • saddie23
      June 26
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Saddie23

  • Beautifully written and I love the background - congrats on your trophy

    • saddie23
      June 26
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. I didn't think I would win. I just thought this was a wonderful contest to do in 30 min. Saddie23

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