Muffins crumble,
cascading hands of elite's,
discarded , treasures to unfortunate.
Implementing a rat race, workers scurry,
for just a morsel of happiness.
Internal tensions stir a pot
boiling with animosity.
A contest entry
- Quickiness! II by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended June 26, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow this peom is awesome... It really makes my imagination run wild lol
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Yes!
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congragulations on the gold trophy and there is a lot of thought been placed in this piece. I like the images that you have here. It is short and sweet but says more then most do in several hundred lines
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congrats on the Gold trophy. Good job! Lots of imagery here. Nicely written. Short but really says a whole lot. You have done a good job. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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hehehe...congrate
love your diction here
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Love your take on the prompt hun!
This was brilliantly composed.
I agree with Mark, love the
title & animosity portrayed
Best wishes
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I love the title!
Yes... animosity.
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