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eternity

a soft whisper..
calling my name
like a feather in the wind

as each brush
of your skin
makes my muscles jump
and want to be in your arms
for eternity.

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  • Walk-Free
    June 29

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    wow. this is so sweet and romantic

    great write as usual (:

    and I do notice how you have a knack for writing this sensual subtleties


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 27
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    this is beautiful... x