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Unforgiving

Lord i made my
mama cry today
Please make the
sorrow i feel go away
Deep sadness and regret
feels my heart
I would rather it
be me than
her i broke apart
As the tears from her
cheek drop to the floor
I ask her forgiveness once more
She want remember what
i did this time
For time and actions
want stay in her mind

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  • Majija
    June 29

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    The feeling of having bad conscience is a well-known feeling. I think we all been there - some of us just feel it more often than others (maybe because we put ourself in a 'victim role').
    Very emotional poem. Very good.