The ocean is beatiful
the ocean is vast
happy he should be
but his sky is overcast.
The shore seems lifeless
the shore seems plain
but she loves so deeply
and is pelted upon by rain.
He visits her every night
brings her waves of adoration
taking that little bit of her
with each painful goodbye.
With each rising sun
the lovers must depart
she must support all who rely upon her
as he, with pained smiles, sees the world.
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Comments
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painful goodbyes of a love that one must keep in secret, so sad and exciting, but then love was meant to be spread open and to be able to yell out the window 'I'm in love!' awesome write.
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wow i enjoyedd this poem so much especially the part "but she loves so deeply and is pelted upon by the rain". that was my fav part
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Beautiful write talpina. Well done
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