I never saw you the days before I met you
but I felt you
and you became only more beautiful
I thought that some days I just could explode and be happy
all over me or all over you, and yeah
You are still just as beautiful
I still feel the same
I would love to explode all over you
I guess sometimes life is like the death of a loved one
a very traumatic experience
it haunts down to the marrow
but you learn to cope....
and yeah
I still mostly question every decision,
yet I still love you
And I still want to
dissolve violently into the mixture
I would just like to know that you want me to.
We both know how to do this,
it never took any training.
When we hesitate a thousand times or so every millisecond,
considering all of the options, avoiding certain pangs.
The intellect indeed can be a bane to evolution.
Pretty in Chaos.
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sounds messy
intellect is a societal construct enthusing the mindless pursuit of quantifying the capacity of a natural phenomenon that should be instinctively nurtured and understood to be infinite and unyielding - like love - it makes no sense if you actually think about it doh
who is this Lee and why are you writing poems about her anyway
don't you have anything better to do with your time
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She's a beautiful girl with a terrible tendency to over analyze everything with her squirrely frenetic intellect. Could you talk to her on my behalf?
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well well, i think you've given me my passion fix for the day... :-)
lines like "i would love to explode all over you" and "and i still want to dissolve violently into the mixture"... i can honestly say, wish i were a guy so I could have written that :-)
this is one of my all-time favs of yours. love it when you expose yourself :-)
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And yet when I do it public, they only want to arrest me. Unless it's on the internet...then...internet money...
Really thank you.
I love that you read and appreciate my work at all. I am in awe as always of anything you write. Not because I blindly admire you, but because you're an amazing poet. So..yeah...thanks.
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I love the way you write your love letters ...
I am sure she will too.
You belong to the Universe, Poet and the Universe is yours.
Love
Myra
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Thanks
I think so
I hope so.
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so deep and sad... writes like this always make me think, when penned from a man, do men ever really feel so deeply? And when penned from a woman I wonder are we leaving ourselves too open to being hurt... being too deep to the point of nauseating? I love it but wonder how a man would react to it? well penned as always
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Us bitches gotta stick together.
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Not really a pretty in chaos piece, but a love letter written in my own stuttering disjointed abstract way.
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