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I dream, a dream

The call to being a dad
is immensely strong:
I constantly daydreamt
of finding a little note
neatly crumpled
by a special little guy
``I LOVE YOU DADA
& HAVE A NICE DAY``
but spelled with 2 S’s
and with three little W’s.

Being a dad
is a pleasure
I would love
in my eventual future.
It would be great
to taste a neat meal
made from PLAYDO
with a tall frosty glass
of a look alike to milk.

As a DADA,
I would love him,
I would care for him,
while guiding him
towards his dreams
but it will start
with the first kiss,
the first hug,
& the first change
of a white diaper.

Author notes

I saw my nephew yesterday and I couldn'T help but think what if I had a little boy

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  • Melodies
    September 14

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    I love this poem and am taking it to Poetry Planet where it will warm the hearts of hundreds of people. Thank you for sharing your big heart with us, Dave.

  • Would not call it your best, but rather touching, and the feeling really plays across, I whole heartedly know the feeling of the want to be a parent.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 1

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    Delightful write..D..A candid look into a young man's desires to be a poppa...Creatively written..and the last lines take the cake!"The first change of a wet diaper" You betcha..you'll get them!

  • A very sweet write. I am SURE you will be an excellent caring Dad in the future.

    Lady D

  • This is sweet there is no greater reward then being a parent kids are a treasure thanks for sharing best wishes always be well.

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