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typical




It was, You know,
a typical beginning.
We met in a bar.
I quoted Mother Theresa.

And I acted cool, because
You were a rich man, a writer,
creative and educated.

And all the angels whispered in my ear.
When I dismissed them,
You simply thought I brushed the hair back
from my eyes.

And all the choirs lamented in the sky,
when I placed my hand in Yours,
and left with You.

And for some beautiful verse,
we loved.
I thought we loved, You know?

And I left with You.



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...yeah, well.

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  • shootingzen
    September 24
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    Just goes to show you...

    ... you gotta watch out for those writers.

    This, for some reason, makes me think very much of Bukowski. So of course I like it.

  • Yeah...

    Nicely penned.