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I gave my best
and Failed.
You gave your least
and smiled.

But in the end
we'll both wind up with grins
In the end
we'll both win.

We gave our best
and Failed
But I gave least

But in the end
we'll both wind up with grins
in the end
we'll both win

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Written March 21st, 2004

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  • March 21, 2004
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    AWESOME

    HEy that poem was really awesome...
    You have a way to turn everything into something beautiful. great job. keep up the great work`.
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***