Soulless people started -
craving affection.
In order to achieve and feel it,
they must leave behind -
their numbness and give up hate.
Finding the needy-
they cling onto them,
and experience love-
for the first time.
Time passes and before long,
they grow restless.
Pandemonium breaks out,
and old habits return.
The victims stand there -
numb
their feelings start to vanish,
& soon they give up their soul -
for another chance.
A contest entry
- A contest for people to write poems by Cerulean Sunrise.
800 points, ended June 26, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awesomeness, yay for the gold shiney,
now where you hiding?
have you read the celestine prophecy...
when it's you're time, you should, you'll know when
this write made me think i should tell you that.... hmph.
Tasha
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nice job
I'm glad you won yours was by far one of the best
really great write
i especially loved this part
"Finding the needy-
they cling onto them,
and experience love-
for the first time."
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ok. i felt like hollywood undead's song "circles". its really good (both the poem and the song
the soulless know indifference and a little bit of hatred, but m,ore indifference. other than that, great job! and nice job getting gold in the contest! 
Daxteriana
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This all makes much sense, but for the numbness and hate part. The soulless don't really know hate.. just indifference.
Thanks for writing. I think it was was well writ. -
Very interesting observations. It feels like it is forever going round in circles, and fits the title very well.
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Very powerfull, I got chill bumps just reading it. You are an amazing writer, and you have a lot of talent. Keep up the good work!
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Hmmmmmm. I quite like that last little bit there. Very nice work on this one! I hope that you do very well in the contest! Thanks for the share.
R.I.P - Ed, Farrah and Michael!
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