I told you that I think we should
just split. I can't help but to miss
you and to love you more with each
thought of you. Knowing your gone
and I may not have the second chance.
I love you.
I cry now. Tears slide down my
face. I feel so lost without you. I
shouldn't of said we should just break
up. Look at me I am such a mess now.
I can't stop thinking of you.
I thought we would spend the rest
of our lives together. Sitting in my
dark room. Tears streaming down my
face. Not one tear at a time. It's a stream
of tears.
I tried so hard to show you how much
I loved you. I still love you always will
no matter what. You're always my best
friend. Hopefully in the long run we can
give it another try. But in the mean time my
heart is slowly breaking.
Author notes
This is 100% true poem.
I split up with (He was my fiance' then my BF)
we split up. I can't help but to cry.
I will add more if you think more needs
to be added.
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This is so beautiful. Yeah, I understand every word. This sounds like a great write out of a billion.
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Aw. That's so ad. Thanks for entering.
Tears streaming down my
face. Not one tear at a time. It's a stream
of tears.
I liked these lines the best. Such a sad write.
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Brilliant.
You are strong. You'll be fine hun. Nice poem. I love the tecture, and everything. Nice job on relaying your emotions.
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this was a very emtional poem and i really enjoyed it. My favorite part was not one tear but a streaming of tears......i enjoyedd it and thanks for sharing
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WOW! this was amazing!
It was awesome! just...WOW! i'm sorry that this happened to you. I hope that whoever this guy is, that he realizes what an idiot he was for hurting you the way he did. 
keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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really loved this and i can feel your pain.
a really great write
amazing and great words..
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oh. you guys split up............i am so sorry. hope you feel better. i really felt the emotion in this poem. great job!
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this made me cry as a read this
wonderfully done, i loved it.
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this is beautiful. i tottaly understamd and feel what you are feeling.
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Again..your format is strange but intriguing. This is very heart breaking, lovely. Flowing and sad..hurts the heart as one reads it. I can really fee what you are feeling.
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