Okay

I know where he went.
And I know where you went.

Better hope we don't find you-
there'd be trouble.

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Inspired by the photo by Tanya Wallace.

all I need by Lavender Butterfly. 450 points, ended June 26, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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tawk
September 4

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Great take on the picture prompt, great imagery and emotion in so little words. I agree very creative! I have missed you hope you are doing well. Have a wonderful weekend, hugs Theresa
Peteskid
July 5
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ha! yes a familiar feeling here, going beyond the boundaries...very creative...PK
Gwenevere
June 27
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you got it just right.Well done.loved it.Ha Ha.
whitecoffee
June 26
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wonderful scenario of words to go with the picture. Much luck in the contest
luna-midnight
June 26

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hahaha, i didnt see the picture at first, and i thought of an angry dad because of his little girl was with a guy. but this is great and good luck
Stephanie ♥
Lavender Butterfly
June 26
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uniquely engaging.. x