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nothing left

lost alone in a darken place
a streak of crimson ran down her face
from out of nowhere he came
but only she is to blame

She listened to his lies
for which her heart now cries
A light of hope he promised she would see
"If only you'd trust me"

The walls began to crack and light began to pour in
and she finally began to feel she could win
but then life threw another curve
and before she knew it she got what she deserved

He was gone in a flash
the world around her just crashed
Life no longer seems worth living
when trust can no longer be giving



Poured from the bleeding heart of Lil'Bit

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  • trust is such a hard thing to earn once one has been burned before. this piece is beautifully written..thank you for sharing it with us...

  • This sounds very sad, Michelle. It sounds like you have had a bad time lately. I was hoping since I had not heard from you in a long time that you were doing well.

    Mike

    • i guess im just FINE again.... just the same ol me... trusting someone who told me to and getting screwed in the end.. sorry i havent been around in a long time.... i do miss talking to ya.... but i wouldnt be any good for ya right now... or prolly ever

  • aww it was sad but beautiful. a guy is the reason i started this downward spiral...

    • thanks for the comment .... it isnt a guy tho.. well he is a guy but not in the sense you mean... just someone who said i could trust him and he wouldnt ever leave but has...

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