Moonlight spilling into night
we start to have a pilllow fight.
You hit me first,then I hit you,
faces and feathers all askew.
You grab me and hug me like a bear,
We laugh and giggle, without a care.
Anxious and open to anything,
passionate to what this night will bring.
We scuffle around, no holds barred,
as love each other long and hard.
We lay there spent, no words to speak,
watching the moon pass over the peak.
Author notes
For my ap brother, owlishhunter, and his bride to be, vampira1665, my new sis in law.
May you always share with each other all the beauty and passion that being in love brings. May you prosper and grow together always. Best Wishes!
PLEASE LEAVE A THOUGHTFUL COMMENT
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aawww..
very sweet dedication! nicely done, so tender and loving..
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Wonderful imagery in this piece of writing here. I love the flow, and I love the ryhme and imagery too. You have done well here my friend. Keep writing.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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I loved this piece! It was very fun and the visuals were perfect. thank you so much for this. I also read it on Kris myspace.
You are wonderful!
Hugs,
Your Sis-n-law
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WOW!! I guess it took me long enough to finally log on and read, huh?
I can not tell you just how much we both appreciate this piece...and it is certainly lovely! Love should be full of fun, passion, romance, caring....and I think this poem is all that and more. Thank you, Sissy!
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How sweet and lovely...great flow that made me feel the love and smile (not easy to do...lol)
Beautiful in emotions of truth!
mystic
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Very cute, concise and a really well rhymed write!
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This is a sweet poem dedicated to friends you oblivously care for. I enjoyed reading it... smiling with its blessings.
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm, and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
OMGosh, this is very cute and also passionate at the same time. The words kind of bounced off the monitor into my mind. Great work on this!
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Awesome poem. Took me right back to a time in the past. Thank you. Deb
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this is so sweet, i love the flow and the play of the words, very well written x
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cool
this a very good and moving poem, well written and deeply moving...makes me sad now im alone lol
keep chillin..........
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Amazing poem,
The writing flows,
You have great skills,
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This is really cute! And congrats to the happy couple!
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ah nothing like a good old pillow fight as the romantic sensations ride the blood, though i recommed soft pillows, don't mistake them for pillars! they will really hurt your head. a good poem.
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