Say good night
Rest your head
Dont have nightmares
Lay in bed
Dream of a wonderous beautiful place
A day of fun
Where you can escape
Leave the world that is so cruel till this day
let your dreams
Lift you away
Far above the clouds so high
Above the stars
Leaving with a sigh
Dream of happiness, not darkness deception
Dream of happiness to warm the exception
Fill your mind with wonderous love
Fly to the highest mountain
And scream from above
You're not afraid of the nightmares that pass by
Because there's someone always there to standby
The person that follows you through thick and thin
The one who doesnt care if you slit your skin
The one who doesnt leave your side
The one who holds our friendships bide
What do you think? Do you like this poem?
Comments
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Great poem, rhyming is very well done...we all know how hard it is to rhyme and it takes special talent to do so while keeping a good flow. *applaudes* But the line "leave the world that is so cruel till this day." seems a little squashed together. Like you were trying to be descriptive and get a good rhyming word at the end but it turned out a little too long...just seemed forced is all.
All in all, a good write! Keep writing, its worth it!
Lightning <3
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