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Forever?

The meaning forever never seems to last
when I keep digging up things from the past.
All those times you said you'd be right by my side,
after all the hurtful times we guided eachother along.

The times when you made me sing you a song,
oh how you made me feel calm.
We exchanged our deepest thoughts,
there was nothing in our way we could get threw it all

There was talk bout forever,
never leaving eachothers thoughts.
It was never gonna end we thought,
until I was so stricken by you.

You hurt me bad,
you wrecked that trust that comforting feeling,
to the point we fought at every time.

Whatever happen to forever,
when things went so well,
everything would pass by so fast without a flaw?

So if there is such a thing as forever, why has nothing I've ever done had gone wrong?

Author notes

Eh, just bout a messy breakup I had with my ex...

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  • great poem

    great poem.


  • RawrxXx16
    June 30

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    This reminds me of the problem I had..
    I really do like this one.
    Im not sure if Forever is just a word that will never exist or if it really is real...


  • XXJennieXX
    June 27
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    huh i can so relate to this...great job..i really liked it.