i know a girl who is broken inside.
she has green eyes that can read my soul
and a book of facts that can’t tell
her why she has to be the one to know
that sometimes,
people aren’t meant to be okay.
Author notes
for Chelsea.
this is a part of something bigger that i'm working on.
A contest entry
- It's the little things that leave craters II by Exodus.
1750 points, ended July 13, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hmm, this is really interesting. Personally I would have broken the third line at "her" not at "tell" but other than that this is fantastic. Honest and hurtful, in the best way.
Thank you
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last for lines are freaking incredible.
honestly, that was amazing.
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Very moving write.
with a lot of meaning
Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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