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When you...

When you held me in your arms I was safe from the world,
When you kissed me I was all that you wanted,
When you held my hand I knew we were lovers AND friends,
When you told me you loved me I never doubted those words,
When you slept beside me I wanted for nothing but you,
When you wrote me poems it made me feel more loved,
When you looked into my eyes I was sure I loved you,
When you were mad at me I felt a great fear of losing you,
When you said you wanted a family I thought I had found the one,
When you told me your secrets I knew you trusted me,
When you smirked at me I knew something fun was about to happen,
When you cried at the library I realized how deeply you loved me,
When you were on you way home I was crying alone in my bed missing you,
When you stepped onto that bus I feared I would never see you again,
When you promised you would come back for me I prayed it was the truth,
When you left me I felt the shards of my heart turn to dust,
When you called me from Florida I realized I wanted you back with me,
When you cross my mind I smile and cry at the same time,
When you see me again I fear you will be with another girl,
When you think of me remember that I love you n want all you promised me.

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  • Yemassee gold member
    July 19

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    What a sweet poem. I remember young love, how it feels when it first blossoms and so I wish you well in yours. Lets hope that "whens" become "nows" some times.

  • A very personal poem to you I can obviously tell. It was very successful and its emotional essence has been conveyed well. I sincerely hope that your partner finds you again as cliche as that may sound.
    Continue to keep the true love in your heart forever and try your best not to avoid bitterness.
    Great write,
    BC.