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Grey

Everything is grey
has it always been this way?
No not everything... not hair
people show how much they care
Dying and plucking
lying and fucking
So there is a sun after all
blocked by buildings tall
There are other colors too
mainly black and blue
dont forget violet and red
manipulated blinded force fed
Distant fathers are screaming
society is still dreaming
fancy cars plastic faces
still exuding traces
of natural soul
desiring the whole
A picture of serenity
why not outside of me?

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Very bad mood today

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  • Cool...

    A great emotional outpouring that matches your mood at the time of writing...
    Strong narrative, fun rhyme & great flow...
    Keep up the hgood work...
    Well done!!!