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Evenings at the beach

I spent my evening on the beach,
The air hung with Salt
Therapy for my weary body.

Watching as the Electric Sunrise
Brought Silky Whispers to find my by the shore
Lulling me to sleep with the promise of Cyanide Dreams.

To soothe my Spooky Mind
Where Kats are Calamitous,
Claws ready to shred.

Where Random Masters are Fulabeans,
And there to save me is a Zombie,
Bad Boy's defeated.

Waking, my lips tasted Metallic,
Acid flowed through my veins
And dreams of bliss to haunt me forevermore.

Author notes

So the names I used were as follows:

Salt Therapy
Electric Sunrise
SilkyWhispers
CyanideDreams
Spooky Mind
Calamatous Claws (I corrected the spelling)
Random Master
Fulabeans
Zombie Bad Boy
Metallic Acid.

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  • Vhoori
    October 27

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    Aww I wasn't in there cuz I change my name alot, huh? I still love you! And I bet everyone else enjoyed this alot. They probably got up and danced.

    XD

    Moonbeam

  • Awwwwwwww I love it rae you beautiful lady

  • Lol that's craziness! I like it though


  • Fulabeans
    July 1
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    Yay!

    I was included yay yay yay!

  • Woot ! I love it, you actually put these together nicely. Great job!

    Josh


  • Billy Badass
    June 25

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    I don't understand why you would dare show me this lovely poem when it no has my name in it!!

    Just kidding, I wasn't really reading it, I read from name to name and when i didn't see mine, I was like meh, it's nice



  • I loves you.

  • Zomg!!!


    I'm speechless!!!
    Thats twice today...(ask kels the reason for the first )
    Yay!!!

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