Fridge magnets bright, hiding ice beneath
your frosted breath as you read aloud,
"To the body buried I do bequeath".
Fridge magnets bright hiding ice beneath.
Lilies draped upon an innocent wreath,
set upon a carefully wrapped shroud.
Fridge magnets bright, hiding ice beneath,
your frosted breath as you read aloud.
Author notes
Triolet: google it.
Please tell me what you think
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excellent
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Good picture this....
well presented. Says a lot with few words in a powerful way.
There is something very telling in this line twice...
"your frosted breath as you read aloud"
and chilling. Good write poet.
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First timer at viewing a triolet..Original write....Most interesting, and a humorous twist to it...
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