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The Flurry Of Love






Inaudible beats

now flay against

barren crystals,

cracking edges to depths

 

unknown…

as each wary whisper
melts into sighs

stability shivers

frozen
with flutters~

 

 

 

 

 




Author notes

Prompt: the above picture http://princess-of-shadows.deviantart.com/art/my-sweetest-nightmare-125123687

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  • justgot2loveme
    August 15

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    outstanding writing here, my friend.
    i really wish i could write something
    like this. your words flow so sweetly
    along, like magic.

    justgot2loveme


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    July 11

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    This is stunning, your imagery and emotion are at top hilt level here and I loved it. Best to you in the contest here


    • jasminerose
      July 13

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      Thank you so very much AutumnGypsy for the lovely award and beautiful compliment on my entry! I was really hoping you would enjoy this piece and I am so honored that you did!!!
      Thank you~
      Jazzy


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 4

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    A good take on the picture prompt.
    Good luck in the contest, friend.


  • anaisnais
    July 3

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    Such a gently breath-takingly beautiful piece....Adored it and a def. fav. Well done, hugs, Anna-Marie.


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 26

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    This is such an incredible piece of imagery to complement the picture prompt!!! Very well penned, with a great sense of depth and presence of thought! Wonderful write m'dear!

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