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Toby Part 2

This little dog is kinda of cute,
I guess hes not so bad,
But I still know he cant replace,
The other one I had.
He follows me around all day,
heel, heel, toe,
he jumps onto my lap to play,
and likes to lick my nose.
He always wants attention,
and really likes to dose,
he chews on all my pencils,
and tried to cure my woes.
This little puppy needs me,
so he will not be sad,
but no matter how i see it,
he cant replace the one I had.

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this is part 2 of "Toby"

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  • xforgottenx
    July 13
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    aww!

    your coming around to the little guy!

  • Nope. He'll never replace her, and never even has to. That's the beauty of being able to love, no matter what the being is. This is another cute one baby sis
    You've let everyone know how you feel again in a creative and thought out way. You always seem to develop a bounce to the rhyme in your poems... then again maybe it's just the way I'm reading them. But I like the rhythm it builds up. Cute write about being able to let Toby grow on ya