this old dirt road
is my only friend.
whether its hot or cold,
i'll walk it till the end.
all alone, my shadow
my only company.
it might seem shallow,
but i'm better off lonely.
i use to trust you,
but you're lies are getting old.
so while im waiting for you to get a clue,
i'll be walking this old country road.
any ideas for making it better??
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this is good


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This would actually, I think, make a pretty good song lyric. Another very good write here...keep pennin' 'em! bravo!

