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Alone in my reverie

Come to me my Sweet
I hear your beating heart
It quickens beneath my gaze
Your mind tells you to flee

No my only possession
Would you leave me so?
To swelter in my passion
alone and deprived?

Stay with my Darling
Take my hand so tight
Do you feel the gentle plea
in my lips as they touch yours

But against my every wish
I hear your silent conclusion
In my despair I let you go
and I'm alone in my reverie

In the dark I wander
amidst the sun-bleached stones
A twisted vine takes captive
my depressive soul

Why did you leave me?
was there someone else?
The memory of you is fading
as I sink into my depths

There is yet one memory,
i could not hope to forget
it lingers...a dim light
that tells of love i used to own

...Come to me my Sweet
I hear your beating heart
It quickens beneath my gaze
Your mind tells you to flee...


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  • humble1
    October 24
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    great write

    aww very sweet poem.The uncertainties of life often pulls us this way and that-do we listen to our head or heart?..