The sun is shining! It's a beautiful day,
I have some time to kill, or maybe just play.
I could take a walk, or sit by the creek,
and listen to the birds as they tweet! tweet! Tweet!
I could work in my garden that's that's fragrant and fair,
enjoying the beauty around me, everywhere.
I could sit on the front porch and take in the scene,
Lush and inviting, and so very green.
I could walk into town for an ice cream cone,
or go to the pond and skip across it a stone.
I could have a tea party with my very best friend,
and wake up tomorrow and do it again!
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well it's raining here,
and not much to do,
so i decided to read,
a poem or two.
i came across yours,
and it made me smile,
it was the only one,
that seemed worthwhile.
i grabbed a cigarette,
and reached for my drink,
as i read your work,
it made me think.
i thought of all the things,
i could be doing,
but the thing i wish most,
is just simply screwing!!
nice work sis, love you lots!
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Very enjoyable poem.
It has a very happy tone to it, but it's never forced. Cheered me up
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I like this poem. it makes me feel happy even though i am slightly pissed at the moment. thank you for the pick me up
I like the play that you make in the second line as well. kill or play two very different things you could do with your time... -
i kno i spend countless days thinkin about wat i could do. unfortunately those things dnt happen. but i like this poem its very peaceful from my point of view
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That made me smile. Thanks for that.
The poem had aa good rhyming plot and a good beat. From the looks of it, that took alot of thought and time. Good job
- DKC
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sounds like a lot of work to me...but hey if that's what cheer you up!!
Happy Schmappy! skippin stones and eatin' ice cream cones...sounds like a bad episode of andy griffith!
what was that in my cornflakes this morning anyway?
Thanks for the pick-me-up!!
-KP
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haha! aww lovley!
This could make emo kids ... happy XD
Me Likes Alot.
Thanks for the smile
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Light and airy and very inviting Sissy...this is a wonderful write, you sure did manage to put a spring in my step today
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Carefree and lovely! Has a calm and easy flow to it. Leaves a image in your mind, I like this a lot.
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How very lovely and positive...thank you for two in a row that made me feel light and smile...
Best to you!
mystic
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Awe,
You know what sweet friend and cuz of mine, this was one of those pick me up poems, very inspirational. These are all simple things we can do in life to bring our minds some peace. THanks for being you, and inscribing here such a beautiful way to spend any day! 
Love cuz Timothy
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wonderful poem, we try to capture and stay in the moment and to capture the day.....we miss so much on our sojourn though life...wery sad.....and very moving, written from the heart and soul.....i think we all identify with this poem....great stuff..keep chillin....
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Now that was fun and I love the visuals!! Nicely done and very relaxing.
Hugs,
vampi
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So true so true
Why weaste even a second of a day for if we would do things that brought us joy then the day would last forever indeed. Wonderful write here
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Your imagery her, sister, is wonderful. You placed me in within the scenes you created with your imagination. A good, honest piece of writing that I am sure everyone would enjoy reading.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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