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Severed Hope

Fragmented wings scarred

flight seems impossible.

Severed hope seeps

within moments

of forgotten dreams.

 

Pain seared

through and through,

 

as coral droplets

plummet from

crystallized orbs.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





Author notes

Prompt: the above picture http://princess-of-shadows.deviantart.com/art/my-sweetest-nightmare-125123687

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  • Angels hero
    June 27

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    Outstanding

    This write is trully thought provoking. As it was said by Immortial Obscurity," Amazing". You have managed to capture so many different feelings in a short few words.


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    June 26

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is amazing. I love the way you've managed to capture so many different feelings in these few short words. That picture is gorgeous too... I think I've jsut found a contest to enter

    Well done & keep writing!

    Laura
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