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American inspiration

We have a hidden highway,
and vodka under the night sky.
we watch the world burn,
in it's madness, and sorrow.
with stardust in our eyes,
we sing.
reading poetry in the moonlight,
while kissing bare skin.
The world pulsating, lillies in my hair.
bubbles of captured oxygen fly away with the wind.
Conversations twist, erratically.
He burns. And hates, and loves.
So fiercly.
Like me,
Love is beautiful.
dangerous.
and so Fucking bad.
I'm falling for an unknown.
I leave young men with passionate stars to cloud their eyes
I dance. I Drink. I Sing. I Write.
I'm a pirate, a defenseless one at that.
I love with an intensity that would take your breath away.
(i capture breath and keep it in a jar, like the misty breath on a winters morn)
A dream. A  beauty. A farce.
We fight. Two different fires. In two different worlds,
connected by a train of lines.
We burn.
We love.
We write, with our entire beings.
Yet we've never met.
One day.
Te Amo.


Author notes

hahahahahaha.
your the inspiration.
hahaa love..

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  • hmm who is this inspiration? lol i want to meet them and tell them to stick around, this is really good. love is so randomly easy/hard to write on. and you did well, it shows that loves not always rainbows and unicorns, so this is beautiful to me


  • Cup-a-Joe
    July 2

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    WoW

    I love this. amazing work. it's all kick @ss, but this:
    ~~I love with an intensity that would take your breath away.
    (i capture breath and keep it in a jar, like the misty breath on a winters morn)~~
    amazing.

    Joe


  • Aesthete
    June 30

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    fucking brilliantly amazingly holy shit.
    favorite thing by you ever.
    this is so us.

    that's passion. you just blew my mind cause normally im alone writing these damn poems. you love the same way i do!
    and that's why i love you my sweet aussie.