On a lonely night; All seemed right; yet something in the shadow lurked;
Oblivious to the facts, two couples laughing so in love, taking a path.
Unable to see the red eyes shine. Couldn't even feel the evilness
from a heart so unkind;
The creature hidden listen to every word. Bryan say's to Rachel, "With you I'm never bored."
She smiles at him in his teal-green eyes, "With you baby I feel so alive, and I know you know it's not a lie."
They stop to take a rest, layng a sheet down. He runs his hand through her brow hair, "Baby you make my heart beat so loud."
Yet slience is the sound on this full moon night; Because this vicious killer, is just bidding his time.
Going through his head is to see them bleed; He's ready to hear them scream.
All of his life he haunted them to make them feel his pain. Because he's so psychotic, loving to play hunting games.
Bryan reaches over, and kiss Rachel with such sweet passion. Breathless she says, "You know that I'm falling, falling so hard I'm crashing."
"Babe, I won't let you crash, I'll be sure to catch you." The red eyed killer never had that, so he will make them suffer because he has to."
Foot steps slowy get close to the coupe that is so in love; He peeks at them, and the anger swells; it's got to be done;
This fien for death rushes at a pace; Bryan see's him first which was the first mistake;
Bryan jumps up racing at the sociopath; Too late a kinfe drawn and in a second Bryan's throat is slashed;
Rachel fightend, on an adrlien rush try's to crawl away; The red eyeds killer catches up and laughs so close to her face.
She can feel the breath on his skin as she scream's, "Don't kill me, please I beg of you,"
She sobbs, "I need to live, please, please don't kill me."
"You deserve this for thinking your so great! Your not! ha ha ha.
Nothing but a fucking imperfect disgrace!"
This monsteious soul steps on her neck; Hold his knife, then throws it down; Then grabs her hair as she pleads and begs;
"This will be you're final breath, and I love having you so scared yet your trapped."
He pushes her head down stomp on it you hear it crack.
Blood is flowing and she begs, "Why what did I do, I never hurt anyone... please, please,", Red eye laughs, "You deserve to bleed and scream!"
He stomps on her neck, terror feels her lungs more with each scream;
But once thre is blood. No way he can stop.
He turns her over and her honey brown eyes filled with tears undeserved; He picks up a rock and smashes her in the head again and again. No breath escapes for her the end;
Still this mestrious phychotic is on the loose, He always is searching when there is a new moon.
A contest entry
- Bad Guys by Obani.
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You should be able to relate.
Comments
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I wish you had made use of spell check. Several mistakes here but yet the poem was good. Just not the scary or horror type I wanted. Thank you for entering and keep penning.
Marie
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Well, (god I've had to say this so many times) I'm not sure how it relates, exactly. It's not depression, but it's murder. This would have fit into my last contests, (but unfortunately) Not this one.
Thank you for entering and good luck. ♥ -
ohh, creepy
good luck!



