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Lost and Found

Missing image

for a while we measured
the distance between us 
with soughs of silence
but your breath...
a mysterious wind
still unfastened the canopy
of my heart.
your eyes looked burdened,
tired of carrying the night...
her constellations and myths.

"More sugar in your coffee?"
I fumbled,

"Mine's too bitter"
these strong farewell flavours
corrupt my tongue.

vaguely recall that you left...
waving from the door

Guess I will linger awhile,
grope 'neath the void

you left behind
and perhaps...
I will leave too
once I find my poem there.

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  • Peteskid gold member
    June 26

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    captures a mood and a moment, something to be held where we keep pieces of our lives...this very well done...PK


    • inder silver member
      June 26
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      lovely comment PK . few words but aptly put.thank you very much.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    June 25
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    There are some sad poems that capture a rare beauty, this one of yours is one of those.


    • inder silver member
      June 25
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      Thank you so much MariGoes for the kind comment and the encouragement.