Offer a man who falls help and he will get himself up
Being around the fool
The wise man dies many times
In his life
Yet shall never face the cold certainty of death
Make a vow and you are lost to certainty
Break a vow and you are lost to certainty
It is better to be, uncertain about certainty
There you shall find peace
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- Ecclesiastes quotes by ml12.
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I like the way you have reimagined the quotes, leaving the message mostly the same but changing the angle slightly. The only thing I would change is the misspelling in the title. Thanks for entering my contest.

