Im just that girl you thought you knew
a smile that hides the tears,
falling back through time at night
listening to the voices that she hears.
Im just that girl that walks alone
although many would hold her hand,
memories falling through her fingers
like a thousand grains of sand.
Im just a shattered mirror image
of who I was once before,
broken by so many bad things
washed up on the shore...
Please tell me what you think
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I enjoyed
I enjpyed this and related....i don't do that alot in poetry wonderful!!!!!!
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a good piece, ah sadness, it captures us all at times and breaks us into shattered realms, but other days we are fixed with smiles
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Wow
I have felt the same way but you have brought it to another level. This poem was great. I really hope you glue that shattered image back to normal. Because sometimes you need to see who you are in order to fix the things that are bothering you. Excellent Write. Bravo. -
Shattered and fallen, those who we once were often take shelter deep within, sometimes you just have to turn over a few more rocks to find them, they're waiting for you too!
Eek, sorry, anyway if you couldn't tell by that random outburst of whatever it was, I really did like your poem!
You've done a great job of sharing something very personal, yet I feel too that it's something a lot of people can relate to... Fantastic!
Peace,
hypnorocker
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short and to the point. As usual you did a good job conveying your message.
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this is really good
really short but it says alot...
i like it.
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