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The Raven's Quest - Part II

The Raven soars by with blood on his wings
Fully aware of the horror he brings
He stops with a stare and closes his beak
For all else will die if he is to speak
He flies through our lives, lonely and scared
For he holds the fate of this world unshared

Be harsh, please.

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