Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

From one romantic to another

 

 

Dear Adrieline,

 

 

You are the ‘she' essence, a fanciful minstrel song, a sonata by moonlight

a serenade on summer's eve. A hungry spirit grasping at waking dreams

an old soul well traveled, who winters life, yet searching for the sage

of your heart.

 

You are one who dares to step further, inquisitive by nature, bold by

necessity, always hungry for ‘something more.' Living life closer to the bone

in solitude, you string words like treasured gold ornaments; poetic language

is your canticle inspired by ancients, for future masses.

 

You are the solitary angel sitting atop the gilded dome, surrounded by

immaculate prayers and incense, screaming at demons, striving for

perfect happiness; and I feel your angst.

 

When you sleep tonight, curled beneath sheets, lulled by the thump of

your heart, I pray, that all desires be realized, that words be captured

with savory passion and most of all, that love holds you forever and a day

in its arms my precious niece.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sincerely,

Michael J. Donnelly

 

 

 

Page copy protected against web site content infringement by Copyscape

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • adsaige
    June 30, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    It would be rather lovely if I could see myself in this light, portrayed as this gentle, loving, nurturing spirit that remembers how to give what she receives. However, I have something deep inside that refuses to be moved, something that refuses to be loved, and left vulnerable once more. Something that refuses to unfold my heart once more and let it be seen.

    And you know, I don't think it's just fear anymore.

    All my best. Adrieline.


  • geckogirl
    June 25, 2009
    Edit | Reply
    beautiful mj


  • Emmyb gold member
    June 25, 2009
    Edit | Reply
    stunning letter