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carnivore lullabye

Missing image
finding you slumped
beneath a graffiti spewed bridge
brambles cushioning a gnarled unshaved cheek
pantomine of profanity
staggered waste in tattered trench-coat
hollow eyes sunken, so distant

un-gone

reminscent vagabond
who ate my purity in gasping gulps
your flesh will be the sweetmeat now
turning on a jagged spit
terror revisted
ragged morsels to sate my endless feeding

i will lick before devouring
slow tantalizing nibbles of cheap wine soaked sweat
tender delicate inner thigh
forlornly thin, brittle
teeth gougung grooves of wanton salivation

salvation

an agonizing gut wrenching debacle
intimate savagery
what quality did i alone possess to incite your nature?
it will be carved from within me, once i but identify it in

you

too easy to take you while you slumber
so terribly satisfying to wake you
do you know me?

ah, but you will
although my knowledge will be far greater
thus being; balance and check of

hunger

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  • cazzy71
    July 5

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    fun,but quirky

    I love the fun and quirkyness to this,it does not all make sense,but I love it,it is charming and just wonderfully bizarre,in a good friendly way.


    • Sheli silver member
      July 5
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      ah shucks, and i was aiming for creepy! lol


  • IronIcecream
    June 28
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    nice ode to an eclaire

    • Sheli silver member
      June 28
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      does one dare to compare an eclair to a bear?
      if so, i must share, give a care and beware...

      oh my, i must finish this bit of nonsense, lol

      thanks for the lovely idea


  • lunarlunacy
    June 27

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    "balance and check of hunger"

    that is a poem in its own right
    or a title to a painting yet to be birthed

    the whole write was amazing, filled with bold precise language and mind grabbing images. You are adept at immersing the reader into each of your written realms.

    • Sheli silver member
      June 27
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      i had no idea what i was doing when i started this, it was wicked fun to write, and the title was a lovely flash at the end to save my flailing butt as i had no idea what to call this either, hehe, i loved the balance and check of hunger also, it was the best bit i thought, a rather good culmination to the mood i hoped to set


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    June 25

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    wow this is so profound,
    you penned a very deep write,
    I can relate to this so much
    well done My treasure

    Blessings

    Rend


    • Sheli silver member
      June 26
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      Thank you, dearheart! How delightful you always are!

      Warmest Embraces

      *MiMi*

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