I knew he needed rejuvenation
tired of the drunken bitch he calles a wife
But before his heart attacks him
leaves him cold and stiff
I will gladly give him a whiff of my rose
I’ll place petals on his chest
let the velvet of their touch
tantalize, yes, mesmerize his wanton soul
Play foul games with his ears
clear away fears that steer
him toward returning to her
My breath against his thigh
tongue teasing his manhood
this will do him more than good
because he claims that women
are merely misunderstood by men
I’ll make him understand
that any man would gladly lie in the place
he nestles his face this particular night
Right within the crease of my release
that boogie-woogie of new sensations
will easily dictate our gryration
until he declares he’s hit the lottery
and sets up the elegance
of an entire jazz bar
just for me little ole me
as we make like we're moving
into an expensive hotel suite
that meets with the lip of lust
constructing the grandest canyon
for him to slowly explore
Then, we’ll dive, full throttle
into water turned to wine
drink love's potion
from fine crystal bottles
saturate roaring fire to douse our flame
call it "mojo's magic" if you will
So, when he returns to his bitch of a wife
he’ll think on me for a lifetime
and smile while he pretends to enjoy
mundane sex with his need-be-changed spouse
then, he'll shine in permanent
remembrance of our encounter
forever entrenched
in his oh-so-satisfied mind
Author notes
The poet I am so very inspired by is none other than
"Jazzcat"
http://allpoetry.com/Jazzcat
Ummm... Let me tell you, he is very, very good!
critical comments please. THANKS!
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Awed and Honored!
This poem...wow! I mean, there's so much in here that goes beyond the sexuality and the sensuality, there is a depth of action and intent that is raw, yet so well defined and perfectly stated. The first two stanzas really pull the reader in and so often when we get "yanked in" so quickly and effectively, I find the rest of the piece doesn't fit with what initially attracted me to it. But, here, you deliver through and through with vivid images and sensual concepts that never let go of the reader's attention. I am honored that my name even follows this piece in mention. Your poetry is always so strong, I'm quite certain you do plenty of inspiring, not only for me, but for many in this site. Thank you for your kind words! I am awed by your ability.
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ah the taste of wanton lust over adultrous ways, well men will be men and women will be women, it's called mad life. a good poem.
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My my what a write wise woman. I'm impressed
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wow, what a grand introduction to your writing.
soft, sensual, hard hitting and yeah, kinda bitchy
in other words....
perfect.
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Renee!!!
I like it; lol, it's rubbing off on you
Beautifully done
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I loved this of velvet pedals showing The Full Monty in a very sensual and tastefull way. -c
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