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Secret Love

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Lacey's Letter
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I love her so, I love her not
I fought myself inside
Because shes with the one she loves
These thoughts I have to hide.

To tell myself shes just a friend
Was hard indeed
Just let it go and carry on
These wants are only greed
So both of us went on from there
As quickly as it came
You told me that you liked me too
And that it was no game.


you love yours and i love mine
so now i wonder how you feel
wondering if my hearts foreal


so tell me?
do u feel like i do
ily!!

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My Reply
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i love her so, i love her not
these are the feelings that we fought
because she loves one, i another
we are not together

so we lie hoping the feelings end
and i tell him she's just a friend
no feelings for her i say
at least not in that way
but its all just an act
and here's the honest fact

you love yours and i do love mine
but i can't deny how i feel
stop wondering cause it's foreal

so believe me when i say
i feel the same way
i love you
and baby its true.

give me an input, please, advice even. and guys, what would you think if your girl wrote something like this?

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