Tears cling to
the light brown freckles
on my face
The last remnants
of your breath
still cover
the inside of
my mouth
I scream
as loud as I possibly can
but its no use
no one but you can hear
me
My throat feels raw
I wish you would
listen
A contest entry
- Talk back to me by graydeth.
950 points, ended July 11, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A romeo and Juliet love story by xXMe17xX.
480 points, ended June 26, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a good poem yes. But this is deffentliy not fit for my contest, im sorry. you have talten, but did you even read my "rules"?
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Very good write. Which poem does this respond to?
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this is about my ex-boyfriend, Josh...he doesn't care about me no mores...so I put my emotions into this poem... a lot of my poems are about him...we dated for 1 year and 8 months....
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