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Now That's Brave

As brave as a lion,
No one could confine him.

He loved the U.S,
And was willing to fight.

Not afraid to die,
He was our brave knight!

With T.S.D on his shoulder,
He had become a littlebit bolder.

He was out there and willing,
Not knowing what he was giving,
He was giving his LIFE!

With one peice of paper,
And one little pen,
He wrote a letter home,
Telling were he had been.

Saying adieu,
To the family he knew,
Hoping that love would see him through,
But yet his life was due!

With 'valor' in his eyes,
He stood there...
Just stood there,
Waiting...
Waiting for his time,
He was going to die!

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Prompt 1)....i thought the kitty was pretty brave lol!!

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  • Samplette gold member
    June 27

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    How sad...and how true to life sometimes. Well written. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam