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The Tart is not So Sweet

They met at a cyber cafe at a corner street
She was making out with a hacker for a treat,
Eyes met and instantly was a love clicker
Super feral she is and a hell of a stripper
For him, it was hard to resist her bouncing treasures
And she was ready to give him immense pleasures
They rushed and reached home instead
Rubbing flesh with flesh, they rolled on the bed

His gigantic dagger penetrated her bunker without pity
Her sexual flair gave him total succour not itty bitty
insatiably he grabbed her from tits for an encore
His rod was still strong, he wanted to fuck her more

She gripped his nuts and screamed, “you sucker”
What do you think I am lousy cuckold fucker
Does your mama polish your winky to luster?
Who does massage your balls to make them cave buster?
In all stupor the poor guy’s face-colour faded
you are nothing but a hooker degraded
Whom did you think was I a sucker so cheap?
Get lost from here, it’s my time to go to sleep. 

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  • Well who would have thought that my prompt would have produced this write... lol
    Not in a million years had I imagined this...lmbo
    I made this contest up when my children got a couple toys but no batteries, so as you can imagine this was the furthest from my mind in the way of entries. However, I did not include rules so there was nothing to disqualify anyone. I believe wholeheartedly in the freedom of speech!

    You certainly have some good rhyme going for you in this piece... not to mention you have creativity... lol

    Thank you for entering, I am in the judging phase now and I want to wish you the best of luck.

    Suzi

    • Thank you Suzi for letting it be in the contest

      Children? Oh my God! Well and see What I did! well yes the OH NO gave me some ideas ))
      thank you anyway for your comments
      Many people pass by but they are afraid of letting comments

  • Seaquince
    June 26
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    they both should have had headaches, to save time.

  • wow...

    simply don't know what to say, this takes a left turn and goes off the deep end!!

  • babbyboo silver member
    June 25

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    Hahahhahaha.... Good one....

    babby

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