Relaxing,
the day is done
Sighs of relief
as all lay their heads down
Street lights flicker
fireflies light the night
as flowers close their petals
trees disapear into the night air
Thoughts of the day linger
with plans for tomorrow in mind
Glad that evening time has come
now all is done, soon sleep will
have us all dreaming...
A contest entry
- Sounds of Evening by crivanea.
400 points, ended July 2, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Peacefully quiet write. Well penned.
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creativity: 15/20
imagery: 15/20
word choice: 14/20
impact: 30/40
well penned! short..simple..sweet..a peaceful evening -
night interlude
after a long and weary day this comes as a gentle
weave that eases in the evening delights.
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Kind of reminded me of the song Memory. A very nice picture of the night. I could fall back asleep after reading this. I love the atmosphere you created.
Nicely penned. Good job and good luck in the contest.
kat -
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ Tranquil.
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