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Renew

Chilled,
rejection on ice.
Time frozen skills
painfully renewed.

Burnt,
around the edges.
Emotions tanning
in retaliatory rays.

Diving,
into relationships
murky, and untested
paddling new strokes.

Spelunking,
the unknown self,
discovering a friend
once thought an enemy.

Springing,
into new thoughts,
welcoming change.
Face lifted  to the sun.

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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    October 29

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    This is a thoughtful poem of discovery and growth, finding a friend in yourself can make a big difference in attitude and perspective. Well done my friend, Write On!

    Brother dennis