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Wonder

Wind rustles leaves gently,
clouds slowly drift,
west to east...

as
heart
beats
heartbeats

as it did
as they did
through the night
without wondering
without doubt
as it will
until it won't

dandelion fluff
rides the wind
a cloud of possibilities
a tempest of maybes
but for the now
content just to be

to find the point
is to hold the flowing river
all you get
is wet

A contest entry

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  • Budart
    July 5

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    Very mystical, very abstract. I hardly know what our talking about. Thanks for the entry. Good luck


    • ParadoxFry
      July 8
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      Thanks, I appreciate the comment. It's a zen/taoist approach to the meaning of life.