They met at a cyber cafe at corner street
She was making out with a hacker for a treat,
Eyes met and instantly was a love clicker
Super feral she is and a hell of a stripper
For him, it was hard to resist her bouncing treasures
And she was ready to give him immense pleasures
They rushed and reached home instead
Rubbing flesh with flesh, they rolled on the bed
His gigantic dagger penetrated her bunker without pity
Her sexual flair gave him total succour not itty bitty
insatiably he grabbed her bountiful tits for an encore
His rod was still strong, he wanted to fuck her more
then he layed her out, as if perparing a sandwhich
placing face to kitty, suckling his lovers pink lips
lick and lick he did, it was long before wet started to drip
lapping more and more, her juices got him high
she let out screams of ecstasy , and whimpered and sighed
he looked up at her with a messy sticky face
she made her way downward to 'taste his face
and then...
She gripped his nuts and screamed, “you sucker”
What do you think I am lousy cuckold fucker
Does your mama polish your winky to luster?
Who does massage your balls to make them cave buster?
In all stupor the poor guy’s face-colour faded
you are nothing but a hooker degraded
Whom did you think was I a sucker so cheap?
Get lost from here, it’s my time to go to sleep.
Author notes
the notes were added by my friend Bohemian girl
Never judge a book by its cover,an elegant lady walking down the faubourg,prim and proper,but a real tight nastee bad ass bitch, when the drapes are drawn,rockin it till dawn.
this collab with Babbyboo was inspired by my friend Bohemian girl and her Penalized piece and I dedicate it to her as she liked it a lot and BLESSED MY PUBLISHING IT 
A contest entry
- entertain my son while he is in jail by Viyanna Rosemarie.
400 points, ended July 21, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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making out with a hacker right off the bat hey? hmmm? i would like to thank you for this entry into the contest for my son and to wish you the best of luck in the judging process. viyanna rosemarie
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This is a very erotic piece, and I enjoyed reading it, BUT, I am going to have to disqualify it, as I Plainly stated on the contest page, Nothing over 25 lines. This has 28.
Other than that, this write was a bit humourous, especially at the end. It is a good read. YOu are more than welcome to submit another piece 25 lines OR under. -
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thank you my dear. I will :)
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U revised it
Now its parfait!
C'est super maintenant.
Love the sandwich,lol,i smell a rat,a real dirtee rat.
This Rocks,oooh
Oooh oooh.
I think i betta logout,its already raining outside,kitchen leakin,dont need my bedroom drenched lol.
Good Luck!
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Lol
Dont you go blaming your pms and horny mood on me.lol
Nd dedicated too.
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yes my dear at least we laugh openly and that is the worst we do :)))) we are honest and people know most
but as you said that is it. I knew it, u know it went the same with Dracula's bride. those people are so well behaved that they read but do not comment on such "rude,lowly writing"
)))))))))))))))))))))))
c'a me fais rire riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiire))
bonjour cherie
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YOU ENCOURAGED ME DEAR :)))
MANY WOULD SHY AWAY FROM ADMITTING THEY READ IT AND WOULD SAY :"QU'EST CE QUE C'EST QUE CA? TRAMP? OH LALALA!"
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Hehe
C'est dang,i swung by earlier,and laughed coz,i noticed just 2commys,and lol,have u seen how many views,i think it was 14 already.
They have issues,coz its a great write!
Whats important is we had a whole hour of a meaninful conversation,laughs and giggles,the fact that the nastiest male n female tarts,are the prudish,my sh.t dont stink,tight stuck up asses
Are the ones with the worst skeletons in their closets.those guys screw gerbils.yuk.lol
Will tell u sumthn funny later.
Ciao bella..
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Hehehe LOL
Dratz that testosterone dude beat me to it.wanted 2 be the first 2 pop this cherry.lol.
Don't make me coerce you into crazy stuff.lol.
Honey ur a kwaker lyk me.
You shuld hav bit his nuts.lol.
Luuuuuve it!
The conversation bout this was funny as ?%ςt.
Maybe u should change the fauxbourg to sum hoity toity street in the states,i dunno ask Swan.
Bisoux
Hehe,im still crakin up.
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The nut grabbing was very painful indeed! l.o.l. oouchh..that's a no no..l.o.l. they need to be treated with tender, loving care..
aside from that, this was HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTT!!!
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heheheheheheheheLOLLOLLOL
thank you my friend)) well ......I guess that is because she did not see the bucks ) it seems it was a real big misunderstanding ))))
should I classify it erotic)
thank you so much for reading it it was a moment of craziness and I asked the collab of my friend Babbyboo and my friend Bohemian girl thought wow go ahead ))
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