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Circle of Life..

Where shall this flight then take the simple me,
carried by the angels or taken by demons?

For time passed, the years went by and yet
nothing more nor less
in a twinkle of the eye,
took me through valleys of hatred and valleys of smiles.

Where shall I seek to find the secrets of life?
Is it within me or does it dwell in another spiritual time?

Please help me find the answer to this secret life.
Should I run or should I hide if time repeats itself?

If only...if only...

May hope find it's way back to me.

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  • Lady Mak
    August 16

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    A nicely written thought provoking write ... ahhhh! "Where shall I seek to find the secrets of life ... Please help me find the answer to this secret life ... if only ... if only ..."

    Jesus Christ tells us where to find the secret to everlasting life if you seek the
    Biblical answer then you will find a answer at John 17:3 The Living Bible ...

    "And this is the way to have eternal life - by knowing you the only true God, and Jesus Christ the one you sent to earth."

    Such thought provoking questions ... I simply could not read this poem without leaving a answer that might help you in your search for an answer ... kind thoughts and thank you for sharing such a nicely written thoughts ...