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Instinct.

Deep Breath In.

Eyes Falling Closed.

Not a image but those flashing in ones mind
A darkness that begins a slow, dull thud.

Thud..... Thud.... Thud.

Slowly, it creeps ever forth, coming around in one tactic
Until it engulfs ones soul, nothing left now
No moral justice to abide, no moral thought to reason
now just a deep, thirsty lust breaking free of its cage.

Eyes slowly opening

Deep Breath out.

Around you a thousand people walk by
Heart beats irrational, heart beats so calm
Yet the one you wish to hear, not yet found.
But when you see the one you want a wicked smile appears.

Cautious like the cat, you follow behind your prey
watching every movement, analysing each second
opportunistic moment when a thousand comes to two
Pouncing like a tiger upon this woeful girl.

The ecstatic pulsating beat breaking free the cage
oblierating any human morsel left behind.
Upon the first strike across the pained glazed eyes
a thunderous clap as she around shows her disagreement.

But now reasoning can be made to you,
underneath the strong carved hands, the creature is so weak
slowly bit by bit, in between the agonizing screams
you tear from limb to limb, a fury coming out.

Tears burst from those eyes, so peircing you look away,
blood spatters upon the ground, still there is no end
no end to this tortorous ordeal you clearly must adhere
until you hear the sound you need to hear.

Not a moment more that passes until you hear no more
but heavy ragged pants of breath and the heavy thud of her
leaning forward over the bountiful chest, a carved smile explicit
as no more is there a heart beat, a beat that drives you insane!.

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  • PureRomance
    June 24

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    Wow! This poem is very dark indeed, but very moving and heartbreaking at the same time. You did a fantastic job with this. Dark isn't really my fotey, but you did a great job with the imagery and depth you put into this masterpiece.