Golden, sunny center
Enrobed in white
Each memory a daisy
Twined to one another
And twined to me
My golden chain of days
Sunset through the hilltops
Another day
Of life and garlands, vanished
What is your favorite/least favorite part? How is the flow?
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When i read this heading, i immediately thought, this is a toothy poem, but it is nothing at all like that. I love the words of this piece. It speaks of someone who is at peace with themselves and the world. someone who is loving life to the full and seeing all the good there is around them. Just very special and bookmarked by me. Thanks for the read. The flow is just right and i can't say which part i like most as it all ties so well, you can't pick a specific piece.
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Thank you so much.
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